I want to kiss you as you drive the knife in
Kiss you as you take what I’ve been
Wanting to surrender all along
I want to kiss you as you drain my last breath
Kiss you as you take what I guess
Somehow seems to already be gone
I want to kiss you as you cut the feeling
Kiss you while my head is reeling
Running out of reasons to resist
I want to kiss you as my world collapses
Kiss you ’till this nothingness has
Traded in my agony for bliss
I want to kiss you like it’s suicidal
Kiss you like your lips are vital
Medicine for me to overuse
I want to kiss you like our world is ending
Kiss you with my heart pretending
This is all that’s left for me to do
I want to kiss you as your fingers tighten
Kiss you as I lose my sight and
Slip away in waves of consciousness
I want to kiss you in my final motion
Kiss you with my last expression
Kiss you as they lay my soul to rest
Very nicely written. It is beautiful
So.. Basically… I live for this. For your poetry. And it’s definitely worth it.
Wow. Thank you! I’m not sure my poetry is worth that kind of attention, but I’m very thankful you liked it!
Oh, it is. 🙂
You are too kind 🙂
Such, love and desire ………. pure hunger and lust. magnificent !!
It was an odd combination of emotions at the time I had it. I felt like it didn’t make any sense, but I had to try 😛
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The kiss of death, it lingers still, he comes, my soul is faint of will….
Kiss/Kill, no choice… Loved the passion… xPenx
Thank you much!
kiss until your breathless as his cruelest act inflames your undying love great poem vampire xxjen
Ah there can be nothing more soothing, and nothing more agonizing, than love. A lethal combination. Thanks Jen
This is beautiful and heavy, quite touching as well. Like the poem before this one, it has my heart going out and has me wondering what provoked it. Also reminds me of a dream I once had…
Will you tell me about your dream? Thank you for the kind words. It was a horrible feeling at the time I wrote it, though it came out with more romance than I probably felt capable of then
It’s a beautiful contrast illustrated by beautiful–and yet forlorn–images! Wonderful as always! ❤
Thank you very much! I’m so lad you stopped by. I try to make sure I create everything I post so that it is always some kind of expression of myself. 🙂
such torment, to love one who is killing you sort to say. I know that feeling all to well, and you expressed it beautifuly!
Love is truly very painful. A beautiful destructive force. Thanks!
I’m still trying to think of words to describe this one…. passion mixed with anguish can be brutal. You paint the picture so gracefully, giving a bitter-sweet effect. Great poetry…
Thank you for the kind words, BlueGem! I’m so glad you visited my realm and took time to read and comment! 🙂