Stealing the moon
Gathering fragments to sweep into piles
Tidied and hiding in unpolished eyes
Weary diversions for subtle conditions
Cradled in visions she cannot describe
Stealing the moon
Kleptomaniacal just for tonight
Grasping at beams–she is holding so tight
Keeping reflections in tattered arrays
Tugging at sparkles that once were so bright
Stealing the moon
Storing the pieces in some other room
Wrapped away snugly in linens, but soon
Dark will be on her and she will return
Burning with passion but never consumed
Excellent VW, wonderful words!
I know it’s a sad poem but they it is written, wonderful!
Thank you, my friend. Sadness can be beautiful sometimes. I appreciate your kind words
I love this one VW, it truly speaks volumes!
Thank you, ma’am π
Lovely lovely poems, is she the the sun “Dark will be on her and she will return
Burning with passion but never consumed” so beautiful xx
Mmmmmm, a thoughtful question. I shall leave you to decide π
Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful!!!! “Burning with passion but never consumed” -( I can so relate to that line). Your poetry is masterful, V W !!
Your compliments are always so generous and uplifting. Thank you!
This is another superb work of art, VW!
Thank you, Lauren π
I love it:)
Thanks!
your expressionism is wonderful.
Thank you, my friend. You make me feel like an artist π
Yes you are. You paint words.
Wow I really like this one. It is so nicely written and touched my heart. β€
Thank you Lydia. That is a very special place to touch β€
I love this piece, I love the last line… Burning with passion but never consumed… and I love the image u used fantastic…
Thank you so much! The images are often very important in their own personal, mysterious way π
This is a wonderful poem!
Deb xx
Thank you Deb!
Great craft at the beck of a heart that is determined not to be silenced.
π thank you sir
This poem reminds me of the song “She Wolf’ by Shakira
That is quite a compliment! Shakira is a stellar singer and artist. Thank you!
Beautiful! Your last lines: “Dark will be on her and she will return
Burning with passion but never consumed” close the whole piece, leaving it stunning to the reader. Excellently crafted. Beautiful piece, VW!
I’m very grateful for your kind comments. Thank you for taking time to read and offer your thoughtful replies π
I love it! the line stealing the moon is amazing!
Thank you!