Just another eve
Another star
Another night
To paint our lives
Across the canvas
Of the seconds passing by
Just another eve
Another thought
Another dream
To tuck away
Under the covers
Of a constellated sky
Just another eve
Another smile
Another tear
To fill the ocean
Of our lonesome
Sort of regal mysteries
Just another eve
Another heart
Another beat
To change the course of
Our tomorrow
If tonight you can believe
Bittersweet beautiful.
Thank you, Sarah. I hope you are having a wonderful Christmas Eve
I am having an introspective one. As I am verging on changing my life. I hope yours is well.
I love it, and I really love the photo, the purple is “speaking” to me π
Royalty! π
You and I believe friend…otherwise I wouldn’t be reading your heartfelt piece and you wouldn’t be creating it. Ho Ho Ho
What did you call me? π
Thank you. Have a wonderful Christmas, my friend
Haha!
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Another beautiful piece, I absolutely love it!
Thank you, Jadedheart. Have a wonderful holiday!
‘Just another eve
Another heart
Another beat
To change the course of
Our tomorrow
If tonight you can believe’
Now ,this is the attitude I love.
π thank you
Beautiful!
Thank you!
“Another beat
To change the course of
Our tomorrow
If tonight you can believe”–A model Christmas Eve prayer.
π thank you granbee!
A nice piece of writing.
May all your dreams come true (or at least the goods one π ) and 2012 be an improvement on 2011.
Thank you Ben. Have a wonderful Christmas!
Simply beautiful.
Thanks π
fantastic!
Thanks!
This is a gem, VW. I love every Stanza and feel each sits in bold, perfect simplicity giving the gift of a greater message that belies the few words. There is the energy of inherent wisdom in these words, that feel as though it has flowed, uninhibited from your soul.
I love your poetry in its totality, but this one I really, really loved.
Thank you so much! I hope you are experiencing a lovely Christmas
And you too, my friend!
Thank you for the marvelous work. Happy Christmas to you.
Merry Christmas, muse! I wish you the sweetest of holidays, full of beautiful memories and food food food π
Oh no more food please!!
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Beautiful stuff VW!! Thanks for posting and thanks for sharing π
Thank you, my friend π
Lovely and whimsical…
I hope you are having a wonderful eve π
true beauty!
Thank you, Jenny! It is good to see you again
VW – this moved me with a wistfulness, a reaching plea – a heartfelt question, with the answer imbedded between the lines. Nicely done!
Thank you, Betty. To move someone with words…the ultimate compliment
I absolutely love every lines … another, another, another…. it makes my heart plea like another lines… how’s x’mas VW? …. π
Thank you so much. Christmas was another day. Life is much about your attitude toward it. Christmas was hard. No one to blame but myself. Thank you for asking
Dear VW, I’m home now and catching up on reading and writing! I love this one; it feels magical and a lovely poem for Christmas Eve. I wish you a wonderful new year and can’t wait to read more of your awesome poetry!
Lauren π
I hope you had a splendid time. Welcome back! Happy new year!
This is nice. Fresh and emotional…
You may always count on me to be emotional these days. Thanks! π