I stare at the lines and they stare back at me
Both of us blank–so opaque and empty
It seems to me I should have something to say
But the words don’t form
Trapped in my head–such a cognitive mess
So many things not worth saying, I guess
It seems to me I can’t be silent again
But the words don’t form
Almost inspired but not quite enough
I tell myself ‘write about heartache or love’
All of these feelings should move me to speak
But the words don’t form
Maybe it’s apathy building inside
Maybe it’s fear of the things I might write
Maybe I’m just feeling distant tonight
But the words don’t form
Sometimes to write is like capturing air
Translating hearts into things we can share
Surely I should have a sentence or two
But the words don’t form
Here I remain without passion or drive
Fumbling for some way to prove I’m alive
Wishing that I could express something right
But the words don’t form
OOH! yes they have a beautifully as well! Mind you I know that feeling it is so painful you think “Maybe the words have deserted me for ever!!” don’t panic they will form! xxxxxxxx
Thank you π
I wrote this a little while back. Actually I just don’t like how they are forming, so I was forced to post something old. My current thoughts are better left unpublished
I (almost) always love paradox
Bless you therefore, VW, for this
I would say just how perfect this is
But the words don’t form
Haha thank you
You’re very welcome (just in case you don’t know. π )
You were have a gift my friend. I mean lines like “fumbling for some way to prove I’m alive” and “maybe it’s fear of the things that I might write” gets me every time. I wanted to let you know that I nominated you for the 7×7 Link Award. If anyone deserves it, it’s you.
I am very honored. Thank you so much!!!
Ahh, incredible… thank you
Thank you kindly, Lady T π
Yet even when the words won’t form you form them so beautifully. Very well done piece VW!
Thank you, jadedheart. Words are difficult to come by at times, like currency in a crashing stock market π
Oh a beauty…so true there still are so many things unsaid
in my heart piles of drafts waiting to be completed and published
and i wait for words …..
so relate to this work….loved it
Ah, I love that. Piled of drafts in your heart…thank you for sharing your thoughts!
fumbling air spoken nonetheless
HONESTY-a great attribute!
Thanks, Heather! π
This poem pretty much explains how I feel these days, just so numb and muted to all that surround me. Lovely piece of writing! So honest
I would be surprised if you are ever at a loss for words with your skills π Thank you sir
But the words don’t form! I’ve lived this. Many, many times.
Glad to know I’m not just extremely odd π
Can relate to this. Sometimes words don’t form, sometimes the ideas aren’t there. Sometimes just lines — empty lines… π
Sometimes the words are just not the ones I want π
I understand this thought so much. Thank you for posting!
Thank you for commenting, Lydia π
Resonating here…. as someone else said, even when you’re having trouble writing, you STILL write so perfectly!
Perfectly? You might be on the wrong blog π
Thank you so much, Betty
Words not forming, like frosting not squeezing through the pastry tube, is often a sign of coagulation, congestion, tightness.
A great observation, my crafty culinary friend π
The pick of Ben Nagaβs Newly Discovered Beauties for December 2011.
http://bennaga.wordpress.com/the-pick-of-this-months-newly-discovered-poems/#comment-1029
:O wow that is extraordinary! Thank you my friend. I appreciate that deeply
Apparently, you’ve formed the words perfectly in this piece ’cause I can absolutely relate to it. A very provocative thought it reminds me of my piece “Dread” (with the the difference that this is the much better and more profound version) I wish I wrote this. π
Thank you so much! I am off to read your work right now π