We, in kinetic pantomime
Soaking rustic sunsets
Through dreamlike pores
Are evermore
And never were
We, in fused schisms
With effortless grace
Bequeathed by flames
Are tempered steel
And feather down
We, in double helix
Breathe rainbows into love
Like winter storms
Between despair
And open air
Superb!
Thank you, sir!
This poem is so cool… I love the picture as well 🙂
I appreciate that! Thank you for taking time to enjoy it! I always struggle deciding what image to post 🙂
I really love the poem 🙂
Thank you, Autumn 🙂
We, in double helix
Breathe rainbows into love
Like winter storms
Between despair
And open air I love that it takes me to places I have never been.
That is an experience I am glad to facilitate 🙂 thank you!
I found reading this felt like blowing dandelion seeds, that floated away to bring forth entire plants elsewhere.; light as air yet full of hidden strength, thrust and life force.
What a poetic response. Thank you so much for your elegant words
Simply trying to convey accurately how I felt.
I must echo what Martin said – “superb” !!
V W, you’ve done it again – master-crafted poetry! I was going to quote my favorite line, but they’re ALL my favorite.
Awww 🙂 that’s a wonderful compliment
Ein cooles Gedicht gefällt mir.Wünsche dir ein wunderschönes gesundes Neues Jahr und Grüsse dich ganz lieb von mir Gislinde.
Thank you for stopping by! And a wonderful new year to you also, my friend
I have noticed your last few poems have been taking a turn.
I think maybe your light and direction is letting go and in the in-betweens; complace, calm, difficult and challenging, it is here in your heart. Love.
Beautiful!!!
We must always hope. In our darkest hour, even the faintest light outshines the status quo. Thank you Heather 🙂
sorry-
one more observation, without words, the changes in the images is moving quickly!
No need to apologize. All observations are appreciated 🙂
Perfectly balanced, perfectly phrased, scientifically and historically and spiritually accurate–a true masterwork here!
Thank you very much!
“Breathe Rainbows Into Love”
The whole piece is beautiful…
Thank you so much for stopping by! I am grateful for the kind comments!
This is mezmerizing!
🙂