There are many things, I guess
That are better left in lore
Though I could have loved you less
I could never love you more
When our stories have been read
They will think us all a myth
For the chapters we have penned
And the plots we chose to twist
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Brilliant, VW, I love every line. You are such a master craftsman with emotive words and imagery.
Thank you angela. You are always so kind and I feel so underserving of your words 🙂
VW, I choose my words carefully with every comment I write, speaking only my truth. And you, dear friend, deserve every last heartfelt nuance of energy that I extend to you as I appreciate the wonderful resonance your poetry invokes in my soul. It is my wish, that you could feel this too; you are a truly beautiful soul, for the words your write could not come from any other.
I am deeply grateful. I could never tire of positive emotions, especially of late. Your words, especially those of your own poetry, are always greatly appreciated. You are quite a successful exhorter and I am blessed that you take the time to share your thoughts
I love the last line. 😉
I’m glad for that. They say the ending is the most important part of a story 🙂
“They will think us all a myth”
I totally understand thank you for writing this it touched my heart
Thank you very much, Lydia. I’m glad to know that
Thank you for writing it. And something so beautiful
A sweet and beautiful piece, VW.
Thank you, Jadedheart
I too like the final line in particular. It winds up such a neatly turned take on its subject.
Well, thank you ben. I try to clean things up before I leave them 🙂
This is just brilliant, I love it 🙂
I’m glad you enjoyed it, Autumn 🙂
“And the plots we chose to twist” – such a powerful line – (it made me go “wow!”) Another great poem, V W – I’m running out of superlatives to describe your talent! On top of that, I can identify with “They will think us all a myth”. (Whew!!)
Sometimes truth is stranger than fiction it seems. Thank you for your always uplifting words. I’m sure there are a few superlatives left. I shall try to help you find them 🙂
and the waters that we swam in all where whirl pools black and deep
the meeting that we missed were rendezvous we failed to keep.
I love this poem I love they way you have written it . I hope you did not mind me adding the above two lines. xx
Are those yours? They are really extraordinary. I could never mind having more and better poetry added to my world. Thank you so much!
I am so very blessed to see the words you write…Your words are so powerful.
Deb xx
🙂 thank you so much deb!
You have a way of “twisting” your words so brilliantly! Many times, I think…I wish I had written that, but only you have that talent! 🙂
I highly doubt only I have it 🙂
Thank you so much Lauren. I appreciate your encouragement
When love is this strong, it cannot help but twist the plot in its grip! Mythology in the making–I love that!
Thank you. Mythology is always better read than lived I suppose
Your poems and images complement each other, both are very beautiful, touchy.
Thank you very much 🙂
Yes, indeed. Such true lines.
Thank you, Muse
I miss your poetry.
Thank you, Muse. So do I. I appreciate the encouragement.
VW, as an aspiring poet, your poems are amazing. Thought provoking, emotions flowing through.
Inspirational
Thank you so much! I am grateful for the encouragement
We were the perfect two
You perfect for me and I for you
Then we fell apart
Like a castle of old
Left in ruin, but still with pride
Our love was too bright and bold
To exist in an earthly setting
We now make for good gossip and wishes
Of a love that came from the soul
Not just lusty kisses
I know the sentiments in your poem too well. I think I needed your words as a channel to rid myself of the above feelings, so thank you. xxx
AndreaNadine
Thank you for tuning in to my channel 🙂
I’m always encouraged by your shared inspiration
this is beautiful as well as the image both are amazingly indeed
Thank you so much, my friend
Oh I love this one so much! Its simply magical and beautiful.
I hope you’re having a wonderful weekend VW:)
Thank you, and I wish you a wonderful weekend as well!
So very well stated!
I appreciate that!