His footsteps, once upon a time
Struck soundly on the paved walk
In steady, even beats they rang
Into the crowded streets they sang
A chorus of ambitious thought
They did before, but now do not
His fingers, once upon a time
Performed their craft for crowded rooms
To raise the spirits of the saints
And soothe the souls of those who faint
A glimpse of hope to them impart
They did before, but now do not
His eyes, oh, once upon a time
Were brilliant blue and spoke the truth
Believing in a better plight
Believing they could set things right
Without the fear of falling short
They did before, but now do not
For once upon a time, it seems
He vanished into nouns and verbs
And faded into distant dreams
To still be seen but never heard
His soul translated into rhyme
His heart converted into poem
No more to walk among the world
But now, at last, at rest–at home
He walked among us
Words so wise
Such piercing eyes
He saw into my soul
My every ambition and goal
He is gone
But his essence lives on
They spoke to him
With such disdain
Said he was a fraud
He and I, we both know why
When they saw him
They saw themselves
Reflected in his eyes
They from him learned
Of their flaws
And thus killed him with
Imaginary claws
Why do we ignore the wise until it is too late?
Andrea
wow. that was epic. that should be published! thank you for sharing your thoughts. what an intense story
awww….shucks lol
The thought of being published scares me
Andrea
lol I agree. I can’t imagine it. Maybe you should go first and give me the courage
Beautiful and love the picture π
Thank you so much π
Or we could publish at the exact same time….ready? one, two, three!!
π
Andrea
Hehe ok! Whatever gives you courage π
WOW …..Hi Vampireweather – i See Andrea too — What power these words have !!!!
So Glad to be READING you both
Best always xo Cat
Thank you for stopping by, Cat! I am glad to see you in my realm and I hope you choose to stay a while π
Yes something special happened there two minds as one! Wonderful xx
π
Wow! Beautiful and powerful…Once again you have taken my breath away with your words, and left the taste of sweet wine on my lips.
I’ve been a bit behind on my posting…Again. I’ve have been slowly but surely making my rounds about…. Well, you have such a beautiful blog with so much of your heart and thoughts that I wanted to give you an award.
http://adamsart.wordpress.com/2012/01/14/one-lovely-blog-award/
Hugs, Deb xx
Aw, thank you so much, Deb! I am grateful you counted me worthy
For whoever this is about, it’s just a beautiful and poignant description. I love these lines:
For once upon a time, it seems
He vanished into nouns and verbs
And faded into distant dreams
To still be seen but never heard…
And nice finish, those last few lines. You always amaze me, VW, with your prolific creativity – including those you sometimes come up with in your comments!
Thank you, Betty. Your comments give me energy to keep producing π
What a moving tale this is, VW! Awesome, as always, my friend~
Thank you, Lauren π
“No more to walk among the world
But now, at last, at restβat home”
But no matter if he rest at home, for his words walk the whole world web. π
Such tired words, I’m sure π
Or else replenished by the welcome they receive.
Forgot to say I love the image you chose to put with this piece.
Thank you, sir!
No way!!! You haven’t lost your touch at all!! hehe… It’s good to read your poetry again π I like this a lot…
Thank you, BlueGem! Glad to have you back!
such sadness as his art and youth disappear…
yet i am left with some hope and envy for he leaves something of himself behind…
your words pinch the heart and leave an imprint on the mind .
Thank you deeply, Cursi. I could ask for no more π
Almost likened to a darkened shadow it would seem? I think that this silhouetted figure is still someone that is seen, someone that is recognised and renowned in the words of old; the light still sparks on yonder frame where the distancing of time that was thought to have stood still, has rekindled the burning orb, and lightened the way forwards in a breath of optimism…
I was so into my thoughts on
this one that I forgot to sign it…
Have a fine evening Vampire Weather…
Androgoth
What a magnificent response and thought!
My initial comment has
disappeared? π¦
Did I add something
that was wrong my friend?
Androgoth
I’m sorry my friend. It appears that I got too touchy with my touchscreen and I must have hit the delete button. I even responded to it and couldn’t figure out where it went. I had to sign into a regular computer to find it and sure enough it was marked spam. I apologize. It was a wonderful and thoughtful comment and it has now been restored to it’s previous glory π
I will try to be more careful with my fingers π
I was thinking that it was the Tale of the Vanishing Comment when I noticed it had disappeared, though I did read your reply π Thank you for letting me know about that my wickedly fine friend π
Androgoth
Yes sir. It shan’t happen again! π
Hi VW its a so beautiful
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What an honor! I really cannot see how I should deserve such kindness, but thank you! π
I agree with the others that the image is wonderful. As for the poem, it makes me think of the great men and woman (or prophets and saints or God’s son if you like) that tried in their respective fields to change the world,but failed to sway the momentum. But at least they tried and they and their deeds never quite vanished…if only they could have become poets after they had exhausted their initial efforts to change the world.
They never really like us until we die do they? Maybe artists just seem more approachable when they are gone, since often their words are much smoother than their social manners π
“often their words are much smoother than their social manners”
Very true. π
There is a Mozart in all of us, eh? π
Vampire, a most worthy ode to a worthy vanished artist. My favorite lines are:
“And soothe the souls of those who faint
A glimpse of hope to them impart”———–healing beauty, indeed!
I also am enjoying the lead art work of this past–so gemlike, so indicative of life-giving organisms.
Thank you, granbee! I am always thrilled to know you enjoyed visiting my humble abode
SchΓΆn bund Grusse dich und wΓΌnsche dir einen schΓΆnen Tag Herzlicher Gruss Gislinde.
Thank you! A wonderful day to you as well, my friend!
This poem brought me to tears!
You have such beautiful imagery!
I salute you for your beautiful craft!
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Thank you for sharing it with me π
I salute you in return for your noble work, and thank you for spending time in my realm
I love the image… striking.
“His soul translated into rhyme
His heart converted into poem”
What a beautiful honor really…
Beautiful…
Thank you. I am glad you enjoyed it π
interesting thought… i know some like him
You must pen the story and let me read π
Splendid work VW! This reminds me of Edgar Allan Poe, in the way you tell the story and the inevitable way in which the Artist departs this world for another. Simply marvelous! π
Thank you. What a charming comparison π
Wow, this is very moving. Thank you.
Thank you for the support!