In the vaulted cathedral of night
An endless chandelier of stars
Dangles brightly overhead
Where bedded oceans
Speak whispered waves
Upon a shore of bronze-grey
Sometimes in the recompense of chance
Two hands pass
In fleeting grasps along parallel lines
Where neither gravity nor time
Stays long enough for tea
And neither do we
Surety for a pact yet unfulfilled
These glimmering fragments
Of twinkle-eyed enchantments
Blow in on the offshore breeze
For a dance on the hem
Of secret seas
Beneath the chandelier of stars
Where all we are
And all we ever were
Is a blaze of torn sky
Trespassing the atmosphere in night
To write initials
In a constellation
Visible for one millionth of a moment
To be held on lips too small
And kept in safes too thin
Before the breeze returns
And claims its stray sand dancers
Beneath a chandelier of stars
Love this poem. I was picturing my self on a beach under the stars as I ready this… Which I might add is one of my favorite places to be. Thank you for bringing me there. β€
Thank you for looking into the words. I’m glad it was a pleasant experience
Oh My god! It’s so beautiful!!!!
Specially “Where neither gravity nor time
Stays long enough for tea
And neither do we”
I loved this line!!
Your imagery and imagination are very powerful!
Thank you, my friend! I’m so glad for your encouragement
Oh what a beautiful poem
‘….Where neither gravity nor time
Stays long enough for tea…”
Lovely
Thank you, Soma!
This poem is so beautiful were I to pick a line I would have to pick the whole poem because it is so cleverly written that each line cleaves to the next bringing forth a fusion of wonder. Thank you for sharing ! I love it
Aww that is very sweet, Willow π
I totally love this one π the stars and that line that Soma liked, me too… ββ¦.Where neither gravity nor time
Stays long enough for teaβ¦β Your writing is so consistently awesome!!
Thank you so much, Autumn! π
I hope you are considering a book…Your work is fantastic. your play on words are of an old master. l love this poem.
Thank you Deb! It surely fits me then because I feel old today π
The stars know more
Of love
Than any of us ever will
For centuries they have watched
As lovers throw rocks with notes
To waiting window sills
For eons they have listened
As soft whispers are shared
For eras they have sighed
As a knee goes down and a box opens
For always they have cried
As love is used as an evil lie
Forever they will watch over
The lovers of this sphere
Forever they will hope
As love endlessly conquers fear
Sometimes it feels like our entirety is being measured and recorded in one silent moment. This poem is alive, breathing with heart beats.
The picture was phenomenal
Andrea xx
Thank you for your lovely words, Andrea. You are very right, and your comments are always beautiful π
From beginning to end, this poem is transporting –
I love:
“For a dance on the hem
Of secret seas…”
Another masterpiece from you, VW!! π
Thank you very much, Betty. I’m grateful you liked it π
How do you do it? Every time I read one of your pieces I am just in awe of lines like “trespassing the atmosphere in night, to write initials, in a constellation”. You really do have a gift. I nominated you for the Genuine Blogger Award. If anyone deserves it on wordpress, it’s you.
Wow, Joanna, thank you so much. I am humbled by your kindness and encouraged by your support. It is special to me that you find enjoyment in reading my poetry. π
I am dancing on the hem of a secret sea, the sloshing of happy tears falling in my heart fromj reading this exquisite poem!
Thank you so much, granbee! π
This is truly beautiful. You are a strong poet.
In the vaulted cathedral of night
An endless chandelier of stars
Dangles brightly overhead
Where bedded oceans
Speak whispered waves
Upon a shore of bronze-grey
This starts with powerful images and keeps going,
Trespassing the atmosphere in night
To write initials
In a constellation
What wonderful language!
Thank you so much, Thomas. Your words are very encouraging π
This is a wonderful poem, VW
Thank you, my friend π
I’m sure you knew I would like this. And you were right of course. π
You make me seem so intelligent! π
I’d never manage it on my own. π
loved the lines of ” These glimmering fragments Of twinkle-eyed enchantments”. for they are indeed enchanted as we gaze at their never ending beauty. Beautiful xx
There is much magic to be found, isn’t there? Thank you, Sue
I love this–the imagery is so magnificent, I can’t really do justice to it in a comment–one of those “I so wish I’d written this” times…
That is the ultimate compliment! π
Wow… this is incredible! I agree with Caddo’s comment above – I totally wish I’d written this!
I’m new to your blog VW, but I like what I see. You can bet I’ll be back, “before the breeze returns and claims it’s stray sand dancers.”
Peace ~ Ben
Ben, thank you for stopping by, and I appreciate your kind words. I am glad to have you here π