Five acre smile
Under backlit sunset braids
Did we set the world on fire
I think we might have
Burning up
‘Til there’s nothing left to save
Did we catapult the moon
I think we might have
Open roads
Counting fence posts on parade
Did we think we’d never fade
I think we might have
Overbold
Plotting midnight masquerades
Did we think we’d get away
I think we might have
I took the wheel
Like all the world was ours to steal
Every golden flake of cloud
Tucked away behind the thought
We are real
Chasing colors like the blind
Call us dreamland renegades
Much too perfect to be caught
vampireweather 
This is just so wonderful, I love it 🙂 Great work, VW !!!!
Thank you Autumn! 🙂
VW …….
This Just rocks …………..
like a movie in my mind …..so Happy You are back …xoxoxoxox
C
I’m glad to be making movies in your mind! Thank you
🙂 XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO
Gorgeous like a dream with a kick! Well done
Thank you very much, Lydia 🙂
I Imagine you travelling across wide open countryside as I read this, seeing sunsets and Moonlit nights.. colours blazing in a blur as you drive faster.. Looking up to the sky and holding your head back laughing.. saying the words FREEDOM!,, Because thats how it makes me feel..
Wishing you well VW.. and needless to say, I enjoyed your words just a bit!!! 😉 Haha… Hugs to you . Sue
What a lovely thought, Sue! Thank you for taking the journey with me 🙂
There is a real sense of the ethereal about this!
Thanks willow!
I loved it!
VW your writings (literally) just keep getting better.
Awww that is very kind of you to say 🙂
Dreamland renegades is just the perfect poetic phrase to describe how I feel many nights when falling asleep! Lovely galloping along with you, VW!
Thank you Grandbee!
Great write VW… It plays in my mind like a dream. ♥
What a lovely compliment! Thanks!
Your words are magical, VW, really beautiful poem!
Thank you, ma’am
Hey stranger! So nice to read your work again…..you have been missed…..I loved the poem, something about it reminded me of my early youth and made me smile….. nice to touch base and please stop by for a visit when you can….your presence was/is always welcome…..
hugs
Celeste
Thank you, ma’am! I appreciate your kindness
You really have found your voice. It is effortless and so well crafted.
I am honored you think so, ma’am 🙂
Amazing. You haven’t lost a step during your hiatus! A strong, challenging piece. Thanks for sharing
Thank you, sir!
Hi VW, ‘……Call us dreamland renegades
Much too perfect to be caught; your poem is captivating, and starts a thought process.
Thank you! 🙂
Dreamy. Comes across as more peaceful at heart than much of your writing. As if that weight is not quite as heavy.
I am glad to think so, Ben 🙂