Stratus Arrested

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Stratus arrested
We escort the vestige
Of dusk and deliverance
Over the threshold of
Coverless endings
A yarn of our spinning
In blood we invested
And stratus arrested

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23 responses to “Stratus Arrested

  1. This one went right over my head…but I wanted you to know I was here and read it, and also wanted to say hello since I’ve been off line for a week…missed you, VW
    Hugs, xx

  2. “Over the threshold of
    Coverless endings”

    – these are two powerful lines, VW. Very clever poem; it’s as if you say to the reader, “here’s my lines… I challenge you to find the understanding”. I had to read it slowly, a couple of times, and loved what you did. 🙂

      • 🙂 TIME LAPSES ,,,,,,,, REMINDED ME OF THAT SONG “LITTLE FLUFFY CLOUDS ” —— REMEMBER THAT SONG ——
        YOUR POEMS ARE LIKE SONGS AND MOVIES 🙂 XOC

      • My my, I was just listening to that! Isn’t that by Orb? I remember the girl’s voice in the beginning and the adventurous rhythms of that song. So soothing… I will have to go listen to it again now that you mentioned it 🙂

  3. Stratus clouds and stratus layerings in our heart–arrested and caught up in the yarns we spin to each other. I really like the wisdom in this one,VW!

  4. This was written pretty high on that “smart” pedestal, VW, and I’m reading much sadness in your words, with endless life struggles…I’m probably way off course! 🙂

    Wonderfully written, though, as always! Hugs!

  5. “In blood we invested
    And stratus arrested”

    seems to sum up what you want to call up here. When the living, moving system of water, blood, or life are arrested then stagnation follows, with then disfunction, disease and putrefaction.

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