So delicate
This skin we pull
So tight to hide ourselves within
It isn’t much
For us to cut and drain
With but a simple touch
So delicate
These sentiments
So fragile in their infancy
It isn’t hard
To break apart the trappings
Of a weakened heart
The smell of smoke
Nicotine ghosts
In structures emptied long ago
On the better side of the worst side of town
At last she spoke
“I made my choice”
A whisper quivered like her voice
While traffic passed but it never heard the sound
Oh God, the blood
The stains are deep
A river cut
Into the streets
Oh God, the blood
My hands, unclean
Have testified
Of things we’ve seen
Oh God
The massacres we make
Of ones we crave
With sharp mistakes
Oh God, the blood
Is crimson red
From tender love
We left for dead
luv this poem, thanks for sharing 🙂
Thank you so much!
Wow. So very heavy.
Yes, it is, and I have held it for a few weeks trying to decide if I should post it. I figured Halloween is the time for the violent posts 🙂
Wow. I love you. Thank you so much. This is beautiful.
Well, thank you very much!
I think that was supposed to say ‘I love IT” 😉
Ah ok lol. Thank you! I appreciate the love! 🙂
I am glad to share it with you. 🙂
Violent in deed yet so deep. Thanks for sharing 🙂
Thank you for taking time to read!
really enjoyed this! ahh, the paradox of the heart…
my favorite part:
“The massacres we make
Of ones we crave
With sharp mistakes”
Thank you so much, Cursi. It isn’t very pretty, I know, but sometimes perhaps neither are we. I appreciate the comment!
Wonderful and provacative.
Thank you, Jadedheart! I’m glad you chose to stop into my world! Have a happy Halloween!
I touched your face
In a dream last night
It felt so real
A beautiful light
I traced your lips
In a dream last night
They felt so real
It felt so right
I heard your voice
In a dream last night
It’s sound so clear
It brightened the night
I saw your eyes
In a dream last night
My eyes watered up
And blurred my sight
All I had
Was a dream last night
But I woke up
And lost sleep’s fight
Such a beautiful tragedy. Losing love can inspire such wonderfully sad art. I’m so honored you shared your poetry here. I hope you find sweet rest and satisfaction in whatever your day turns out to be. Empty arms are sometimes blessings in disguise, and our loneliness is like a pulse, reminding us that we still have love. So long as our hearts beat, pain is a certainty, and so long as we are capable of dreaming we will envision things we do not have. It is our endless longings that push us on to greater heights, and our inability to stay filled that creates ambition. I hope you have a very fulfilling day with the minimum amount of haunting possible 🙂
Unless it is a good haunting of course
I am honored that you even allow me to post my silliness here. I can’t imagine how my poetry would belong anywhere near yours. But you keep pushing me on. 🙂 Empty arms are not my first choice, but there does tend to be some inspiration and driving force in loss, tragedy and frustrating longing.
This poem came from a dream I had last night. It was such a wonderful and powerful moment. I woke up longing for it to be true. But I woke and realized my moment would just have to be in dreams for now. But it was beautiful nonetheless. Probably one of the most real dreams I’ve ever had.
As for the haunting… It is an appropriate day for that. 😉
We all have empty arms at times, but I’m sure one day you will find someone to fill them. And yes, indeed it is a good day for a haunting!
Well, I’ve already done that. 😉 I’ve probably haunted on several occasions also.
That was just the amount of tension, tenderness and then boom! The shock at the end. Great poem, great words and flow! Remind me not to fall in love with you ever!! :0) XXX
I’m not sure how this one came to be so dark, but I agree with you–please do not fall in love with me lol. I am cursed and entirely unsafe. Avoid it at all costs! I should wear a sign on my forehead warning people. 🙂
Thank you Willow! I wish you a very happy Halloween!
And danger signs all around you. Flashing lights maybe? 😉
I’m sure it couldn’t hurt 😛
What a great poem, I love the deep and stark ending.

Hope you have a Happy Halloween!
Big hugs, Nikki
Thank you for stopping by! Love your designs 🙂
Wow! I love the poem!
Hope you have a Happy Halloween
Deb xx
Thank you so much Debbie! I hope you are having a great Halloween 🙂
An excellent offering my friend
Vampire Weather and I hope you
are enjoying a Halloween of the
most creepy also…
A little treat fro you 🙂
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Androgoth
Thank you for the treat! Happy Halloween to you as well! And thank you for the energetic coffin dweller 🙂
I am pleased that you liked that small Vampy 🙂 This weekend I will be trying to catch up on yours and many other postings, I am so far behind on everyone’s so don’t be thinking that5 I am neglecting to call by my friend, indeed I have never been this far behind since I first joined WordPress over a year ago so hopefully I will start to catch up sooner rather than later 🙂
Have a wicked evening and
weekend Vampire Weather 🙂
Androgoth
I’m glad you stop by! I will try to make sure it is all still here when you have time to return 🙂
Sorry for the typo 😦
Androgoth
This poem was so much in keeping with Halloween 🙂 I like it !!
Thank you! Yes, it is probably my most bloody one to date, so I thought if I saved it for Halloween it would be more appropriate 🙂
the beauty of life and how fragile it truley is. your words speak volumes!
I’m glad to see you in my neighborhood again, Jenny! Thank you 🙂
mystery and i loved it. first made me think of suicide then a road accident and back to suicide. ultimately it comes to blood. blood has a tendency to shake mortals. we we see blood we feel a sense of fainting, the feeling that we don’t want anyone to spill their blood. unless you are a coldblooded murderer a war weary soldier or a trained doctor, blood shall shake you leading you to think “oh god the blood” 🙂
So good to see you back! I have missed your posts. Thank you very much!
I absolutely loved it!
Thank you Vanity Mask!
I can’t help but to look at your Gravatar after reading this…LOL…this hits home…the heart is indeed fragile…and I have done my share of masacres…not proud of it…not intentional…but I do have blood on my hands. Great piece Vampire!
Thank you, tincup. My gravatar was created with just that kind of thought in mind. Ah the pain of love 🙂